On Monday our school was on lockdown. It was a very scary experience for us. We all had to get under a table where we stayed until it was safe to come out. We did some writing about it on Tuesday.
Check out some of our writing.
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| Yesterday I felt scared. We went under the table. Written by Nico Start |
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| Yesterday I felt scared. Firstly, we heard the bell. It was going on and off. Afterwards, I went under the table. Written by Kenzo Patali |
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| Yesterday I felt scared because it was a lockdown. Written by Joshan Ratusau |
Thank you Joshan, Kenzo and Niko for sharing your writing with us ... what awesome writers you have #Incredible2s
ReplyDeleteNico, I really liked how you used your alphabet sounds to help you with spelling difficult words. Your next step is to write a compound sentence using the word 'because'.
ReplyDeleteKenzo, I really liked how you followed our ideas from our writing plan from the other day and used the words; firstly and afterwards correctly. Your next learning step is to write compound sentences using the word 'because'.
Joshan, I really liked how you wrote a compound sentence using the word 'because'. Your next step is to add more information, by writing more than one sentence.
Must've been scary indeed! I love your pieces of writing, Room 2. Keep it up.
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